Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Casablanca

I wish we were back in the dim
light, your roommate there on the couch
and Humphrey Bogart looking grim –
a sour cheers and a slouch –
as if we were the slim
broad who’d left him biting his lip
on the platform, cut to the quick
by no hand on no familiar hip,
no Ilsa or her Swedish sounds.
She’s pure love in a slip
and, no question, we’re into it –
your roommate and you and I and Rick:
Of all the gin joints in all the towns
in all the world
we say. Rick frowns.

4 comments:

Alex GH said...

A very nice sense of mood! The strong structure of the sonnet and the amorphous images balance each other nicely. Something is happening underneath these essentially anonymous images.

T. Claymore said...

Hilarious.

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Anthony said...

YAY!

I'm claiming royalties.

I really do like this-

-anthony